The motivation letter (Statement of Purpose, Personal Statement or Letter of Motivation) is the only document where the committee gets to know you beyond your grades. Among dozens of candidates with the same GPA, the choice is often made because of this letter.
Below we have gathered the approach we have used with our students for years into 7 steps.
1. Research the programme in depth
Before you start writing, read the programme page carefully: which courses it has, which professors research which topics, where graduates work. The committee expects a concrete answer to “why our programme?”. Sending the same letter to every university is the most common mistake.
2. Find your core story
A strong letter is built around one line: what brought you to this field, what you have done so far and where this programme will take you. Ask yourself:
- When and how did my interest in this field begin?
- Which project, job or experience shaped me the most?
- Where do I see myself in 5–10 years?
3. Build the structure
In most cases this structure works:
- Introduction: a short, concrete moment or idea that grabs attention (no cliché quotes)
- Academic background: the most relevant courses, projects, research
- Practical experience: work, internships, volunteering — focus on what you learned
- Why this programme: specific courses, professors, opportunities
- Future plans: short- and long-term goals
- Conclusion: a short, confident ending
4. Show, don’t just tell
Instead of writing “I have leadership skills”, give a concrete example that shows it: which team you led, which problem you solved, what the result was. Numbers and concrete facts make the letter convincing.
5. Follow the requirements
Check the word or character limit, the format and the questions you must answer. Writing over the limit or leaving a question unanswered weakens the letter. If there is no limit, 1–2 pages (about 600–1,000 words) is usually considered optimal.
6. Avoid the most common mistakes
- Copying a ready-made example from the internet (committees recognise it easily)
- Simply repeating your CV
- Overly generic phrases: “it has been my dream since childhood”, “I want to change the world”
- Misspelling the university’s name or leaving in another university’s name
- Grammar mistakes
7. Get feedback and rewrite several times
A good motivation letter usually takes 3–5 drafts. Read the letter aloud, put it aside for a few days and look at it with fresh eyes, and get feedback from someone who knows the field. At Hogwart Academy we work on every letter with several rounds of feedback.
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